Terrance had now been walking for hundreds of miles living only on water and the occasional lizard he found and cooked in the sun which was still unhealthy because it was still really raw. He had now walked so much nothing was in sight not a cactus not a single living thing. He kept walking and survived of the food he saved but he was running out so he kept going as quick as he can without getting fatigued. He kept hiking but nothing was found except a old run down motel and a highway.
Terrance went into the rundown hotel. He there found bottles of water. He was thinking if there was even life here. He finally found people who are trying to get out of the desert too, and they had water and food. They all survived.
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He went into the motel and found it deserted. He went to the kitchen to see if they had any food. The whole kitchen was stocked with food and water. He found a bag and put all of it in it. When he went outside he found a car. He turned the key. It worked. He drove back to civilization in the car.
Then he goes into the hotel, and see’s a drinking fountain. He goes to it and tries to drink water. When he presses the button nothing comes out. He goes up to the receptionist and asked for water. She says no, takes out a gun, and shoots him.
He goes into the hotel and finds some old caned food and some water that looked somewhat good he finds an old pillow case and puts all of his items into the pillow and he went out side when he went outside he saw a railway with a slowly moving train he ran as fast as he could to catch up to the train he hopped on and he was taken back to civilization
He went into the motel and found it deserted. He went to the kitchen to see if they had any food. The whole kitchen was stocked with food and water. He found a bag and put all of it in it. When he went outside he found a car. He turned the key. It worked. He began to drive away when he realized he forgot to get the gas that was by the car. He was already 50 miles away and he was nervous. He looked around for his food so he could have a snack. He realized he forgot his bag of food and water too. Right at that moment the car shuddered and stopped. He was stranded in the desert again. He went outside and began his trek. He only walked 5 miles when he collapsed on the dirt road, dead from heatstroke and dehydration.